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Blacknight of the Twilight Sky by ~Raikeh:iconRaikeh:



When the sun has gotten tired of shining, and the darkness is beating him up,
When the stars come out in silent and the blackness in now on top,
And the poor sun is whining, for he is about to disappear
There you come from the nowhere, with your horse and your spear
A sigh, a smile, and brilliance in my eyes
You paint my world fantasy-like
And now where’s my reality?

Your waving hair makes my day; your natural grace drives me insane
And when I’m about to fall down fainted, you’re already there catching my breath
Your galloping horse gracefully carries you, while your chest is lifted up
What a well-structured godlike creature!
Are my eyes telling me wrong?

Further explanation is indeed needed
As long as I know Greek gods are inexistent
I must confess you are a stunning aberration
And honestly, how can I ask for more perfection,
if of it you’re the incarnation?
©2008-2009 ~Raikeh
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Well, I felt a sudden desire for writting about the Twilight, but somehow I ended up writting about a guy (no special guy, by the way xD). I guess it's because the Twilight can be put inside the romantic stuff :|

I really like this poem, so hope you guys can enjoy it as well. :heart:
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para alguien en especial? XDD
te quedó super, decirtelo no está de sobra auqnue ya lo sabes, escribes muy bien!!

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Why so serious?
DDDDDDDD:
Awwww grax sensei :heart:
wujuuu io lo vi antes io lo vi antes jaja envidienme!!!!

genial Raikeh :heart:

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Insatisfecho...va por el mundo mi ser

avy por =Arekins
great poem, it sounds like it is written by an adult.
Np and keep going for the wonderful work!
Es mejor de lo k recoraba!!! <3<3<3<3

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~/タスックイ\~
Holyshiet.
I love ur poems bitch.
I LOVE them

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Hallo thar.
My avy was made by smexay *Pumita
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